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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 13, 2004 19:06:01 GMT -5
sorry Yanagi read Setting for first Campaigns under Fanticy rp it stat that THIS DOES NOT TAKE PLACE ON EARTH !!!!! Your not done yet go to that web sight under caricter sheets to take the test!!!! PS YOU VERY MERY-SUE ISH
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Post by Q on Sept 13, 2004 19:10:14 GMT -5
Is this a character for a role play or who you are while posting elsewhere. If this is your role play character, please read the requirements in the character sheet sticky above and take the mary sue litmus test. Also read the setting for the role play so you have an idea of the culture and history of the world you wish to join. Currently you could only join the fantasy realm as of yet because I haven't put up the setting for the sci-fi role play.
So untill you complete the requirements listed in the character shet main topic this character cannot be used in role play. if this wasn't your intention, i/e. this character is you, place this in the general board.
Oh, and welcome to the board and I apologise for the rant.
p.s. Try not to name your character after your screen name or your screen name after your character unless there is no other option or you are only role playing.
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Post by Yam on Sept 13, 2004 19:11:00 GMT -5
Hold the phone, "does not take place on earth?" -__-; where do we exist than?
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 13, 2004 19:12:46 GMT -5
Just read Setting for first Campaigns in the fanticy section!!!!!
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Post by Yam on Sept 13, 2004 19:19:24 GMT -5
That is unfair, it limits the persons creative mind to what this one person believes would be a fair character. *sighs* I really dont wanna go through all those questions. Im not used to being limited on rping. Sayoonara!
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 13, 2004 19:23:47 GMT -5
hey dont go dont feal to bad but dont go its realy not hard!!!! pleeeeeeassssse dont go!!!
*crys with disstress please*
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Post by Q on Sept 13, 2004 19:25:56 GMT -5
The limits are so no one God modes. In any universe there are limits and in this universe there are few, fewer than most anyway. This does not limit the creativity, in fact it enhances it because the player must think up unique powers with limitations that fit in with the universe. This is no easy task, but those creative enough or wish a challange enjoy it.
The rules exist for reality's sake. We don't want uber-powerful characters coming and destroying the villian to make the world peaceful. Espically for those who like playing the villian.
If you find these limitations to constricting then go ahead, leave, I won't stop you.
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 13, 2004 19:34:59 GMT -5
*shigh* ok will but just try... after all its realy very simple it helps you realy think!!!
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Post by Yam on Sept 13, 2004 19:44:30 GMT -5
Srry, I would, but I like simple settings and no tests to take. I get that enough at school. (my brain is melted and can't think) Srry I didn't read the rules n stuff first. I have other rps to attend to, srry Mer-chan I might try it later....srry
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 13, 2004 19:47:02 GMT -5
very well my friend but do one thing for me and read the start of our story that if you chosie can be yours as well...
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Post by Q on Sept 13, 2004 19:48:55 GMT -5
Sorry this isn't the simplistic world you like, really I am. But I prefer worlds with some complexity, it makes them more real and intresting. You could lose your self on a complex world, and some of us want to do just that. The tests aren't that hard and you only have to take one once. Try if you want, don't if you don't. Its up to you.
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Post by Yam on Sept 15, 2004 18:47:25 GMT -5
Ok! I fixed my rp charactor! (That stupid test! It added alot of points if you felt the test insulted you and ur charactor.....-_-) I tried don't hurt me!
Character name: Yanagi nickname: Yan Gender:Female Race: human Age: 14 Hight:5 foot Weight: Secret Eye color: lightgreen Hair: Forest Green, also in pig tails ^_^ Powers: Can speek with plants, (example:good for tracking people) can make a barrier with dirt/rock, can summon hundreds of worms from the lovely ground. Special skills/Training: Shes awsome with a bow! ^^ She's a good hunter/tracker. Weapons or unique items: Bow and arrows, shrikens (throwing stars) she has them hidden, an a knife. General Personality: Often you can find her rolling down random grassy hills ^^ Background/History: She was an orphan (sp?) and never knew her parents, she lives near village type place, in a forest. She lives in the forest near the village, but she hunts and brings in alot of meat and fur for the villagers and thats how she gets paid. She lived in an orphage! Not REALLY having parents (village is kinda poor) and she basicly left it and went on her own. Which Role Play he/she/it will be in:Fantasy Role Play Clothes: Wears mosty cammo ^^ She also has a cammo colored mask she wears often to hide her identady. Mary-sue test: 29 (She doesn't live in the village thats on fire....)
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 15, 2004 18:59:31 GMT -5
very good ;D much better I except, though Q needs to as well
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Post by Q on Sept 15, 2004 19:21:36 GMT -5
you are borderline...better score than last time but parts of your characher sheet don't make sense.
Such as the hair color changing (forest green then she is an outcast for her weird pink hair?). Different hair colors are actually the norm in this world. Hair color wouldn't be enough to make some one an outcast. Her powers seem reasonable, and related to eachother. Earth elemental control, or at least minor. The worn thing is weird but it fits.
Changing Deamons into worms is cruel and would be considered a crime in this world. Deamons are actually a clan of humans with similar powers that live in an isolated community.
Your character's personality is strange beyond all semblence of reason. From your description, I would have her committed to an insane aslyum, if they existed in this universe. Too happy people in a semi-depressing medieval/borderline industrial age world (wow missing an age there)
The orphan thing is clishe, and your characher's past doesn't quite fit in. With her power she should have at least a middle class status, not high or low middle class of median. Only those with little or no power are considered of low status.
I can understand the not knowing the parents thing and the orphan thing if they died recently, such as in the past four years. It is feasable because there really isn't a long lifespan in this universe or non nobles.
With a little work and less continuity errors within the sheet it self i could approve this character. But not quite yet. Almost there. A few tweaks and your done. Your score on the test is acceptable.
BTW: why would you feel the test insulted you and your character. the character isn't technically you, and i prefer to torment my characters. Hehe poor Aramis...
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 15, 2004 19:42:05 GMT -5
shes right about the demon thing you know ;D prohaps it should be enimies instede!!
also i didnt ceach the pink hair thing Qs right Im confused
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 12:35:38 GMT -5
*sighs* I was only going for what I know of demons. (Like the ones on inuyasha!! Like monster type things, and most of them are evil!) Not humans with demonic powers. Sorry for not knowing! (I updated my charactor bio thingy)
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Post by Q on Sept 16, 2004 13:39:31 GMT -5
This is understandable but for future reference I would Recommend that you head over to the fantasy role play and read the topic labeled 'setting'. It will give you a background of the world and its cultures. This is a completely fictional world of my own creation. It has no relation to animes or other universes like that. (I do tolerate japanese weapons though.) Soon we hope to have a language base for slang and foreign terms, unrelated to any common language of earth. If you do this you will be better able to understand our little nitpicks...ok? On the character sheet...lose the changing things into worms, it could get annoying very fast and still would be considered a crime if she does that to an intellegent being....and when she summons the worms they have to come from somewhere, coming from nowhere is technically impossible. One of these days I'm going to write up a long thing on the physics of this universe and why the things work the way they do...but for now...I have other priorties Like I said before, a few more tweaks... And please read the setting before you join in. Everything will make much more sense that way.
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 16, 2004 16:04:45 GMT -5
yes yes true. I think your fine for know though it would be a good thing to read the story plot ;D
oh Q yah I helped creat the world too you know!!!! ;D
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 16:25:17 GMT -5
-__-; oviously EVERYTHING comes from SOMEWHERE! I know.......I had a fever when I wrote it!! I can't have it perfect alright! And, a higher being could simply doge it, or deflect it, or it simeply not work! (Compare it to Kagomes arrow! It can't disroy Naraku, and it eather simply misses or it doesn't do anything.) Geez, Ill go back and fix it....
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 16, 2004 16:36:18 GMT -5
much better willow errr Yahnigi thats much better too bad Q not on
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 16:41:23 GMT -5
-____- yea, now Im not wroth anything....I can't even fight.... a hunter, doesn't kill humans nor is trained to kill them, only animals, humans are totaly different, and now in this world, they can kill me before I blink.
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Post by Feathers on Sept 16, 2004 16:48:23 GMT -5
hey yo!
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 16:51:15 GMT -5
I give up.... maybe I can be a burnt zombie who died in the village fire and comes back to haunt everyone...
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Post by Feathers on Sept 16, 2004 16:56:40 GMT -5
COOL!!!!!!! hey J/k I don't even know if thats possible..... But please don't go.. As I said a million times before (actually only around 5) you can still talk on the General and Party Room boards(and all the other ones). So please even if u dont do the RP just go on and talk every so often!
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 17:04:43 GMT -5
ill eventually forget -__- I got board of neopets cause of that. My charactor is useless, for I don't want to strain my brain, besides, I see everyone at school. My effort would be wasted if I continue to try to fix the charactor I made. Besides! I can't have my enemy explode nor turn to dust, its not like the person can't be turned back into a human or whatever from the worms, unlike dust or air. I can't think of anything to do with earth, and Im not into throwing roses at the enemy like Mask in Sailormoon.
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Post by Feathers on Sept 16, 2004 17:07:15 GMT -5
LOL! the throwing roses thing is funny Yeah I guess we can talk at school.
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Post by Feathers on Sept 16, 2004 17:07:44 GMT -5
BTW hope u feel better!!!
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Post by Yam on Sept 16, 2004 17:09:05 GMT -5
yea, Ill be going to school tomorrow, mom wouldn't let me go to school cause of my fever XD
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Post by Feathers on Sept 16, 2004 17:14:48 GMT -5
Yay!! I'm going to give u ur book back! I wrote ur name in it 2!!
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Post by Q on Sept 16, 2004 18:59:31 GMT -5
Much better...BTW I didn't mean you can't kill anybody, just that you can't change them into worms. The worm thing, to me, is overly cruel and I don't even know if it would be possible... /me mutters something about other dimentions and transporting worms from alternate realities while transporting the person there ...Ok it would work... I guess you're approved, character's a bit borderline but Okay. I'll warn you if things get out of hand or continuity, I'd do that for anybody, and it'd be a PM. ;D So, good luck and have fun roleplaying.
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