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Post by Clicky on Sept 14, 2004 17:32:03 GMT -5
Character name:Mica- how you say it (i was recently corrected!) its not mee-ca...like i thought, its My-ca..lol(shout out to Zuly for correcting me!)
nicknames:Mikkee(alias for her mercenery work) Gender:female Race:Amazon(is that a race?) Age;17 hight;5 9 weight:100lbs Eye color;A swirly blue-green(changes w/ emtions) Hair color: Dark orange w/ streaks of red and gold in sunlight Powers:natural fighter; during a life/death situation,she can become as smart and strong as she needs to be,but she loses it when she or who she is protecting is safe(but this has a time limit because it drains her energy) Special skills/Training:ninja/fighter(in 3 arts native to her home town,but she doesnt know that:it was learned when she was a child)
Weapons or unique items:an orb that shows how she feels (a curse because it makes it hard to lie when its in view)
General Personality:is VERY mistrusting,makes people go through extreme challenges to trust them(still wont trust them completely)is easy going/lazy when she can be
Background/History:She lost her memory of her childhood(doesnt know about her heritage)was taken in by a band of thieves(brother/ sister relationship w/ all of them)Learned to survive alone Is currently a mercenary
Which Role Play he/she/it will be in:Fantasy
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 17:37:02 GMT -5
good good but you still have to take the Mary- Sue test and score belowe 30 before you can join the story!!!
(do the thives have any thing to do with the theves who killed Kayas mechint parents??
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Post by Clicky on Sept 14, 2004 17:47:35 GMT -5
umm i got a 27 on the Mary Sue test its under 30!! *shifts gaze*
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Post by Q on Sept 14, 2004 17:51:01 GMT -5
Good character. Amazon is actually cinsidered a type of culture, but in this role play it is condidered a race. (race--similarly talented people, such as elves, deamons, mer-people, or in your case amazons) Very good start but I/We cannot approve it untill you take the mary sue test. There is also a shorter G.O.D. test but it is written toward a different role play realm. Just a tip: You may want to remove the loss of memory. To many clishe characters have that quality. It could be that she just has a hard time remebering things, bad memory, but not necessaraly lost memories. The above was just advise, feel free to ignore as per usual.
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 17:51:26 GMT -5
thats ok I think I will ask Q (shes the head hunco) for now ust modify your caricter sheet and add that in.
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Post by Q on Sept 14, 2004 17:52:10 GMT -5
27 is good... My character for sci-fi has that...But we haven't started that yet...
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Post by Q on Sept 14, 2004 17:56:22 GMT -5
um...maybe lose the orb, From what I see it holds no purpose, unless it was her last reminder of her past. And having a poor or suppressed memory sounds better than a lost one, works the same way but can be used in plot devices or motivation while a lost memory doen't do anyone any good, (except for maybe a villian)
Other than that, Approved.
P.S. if you have any questions post them in the role play question board or IM me....
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 17:58:30 GMT -5
CLICKY!!!
good character. some of it is cliche, cut that is very typical.... so YAY!
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Post by Clicky on Sept 14, 2004 18:02:52 GMT -5
Character name:Mica
nicknames:Mikkee(alias for her mercenery work) Gender:female Race:Amazon(is that a race?) Age;17 hight;5 9 weight:100lbs Eye color;A swirly Green-white (changes w/ emtions) Hair color: Dark orange w/ streaks of red and gold in sunlight Powers:natural fighter; during a life/death situation,she can become as smart and strong as she needs to be,but she loses it when she or who she is protecting is safe(but this has a time limit because it drains her energy) Special skills/Training:ninja/fighter(in 3 arts native to her home town,but she doesnt know that:it was learned when she was a child)
Weapons or unique items:weird looking ball she always palys with(no real reason for having it(like indiana jones's hat!!)
General Personality:is quite mistrusting,makes people go through extreme challenges to trust them(still wont trust them completely)is easy going/lazy when she can be
Background/History:She has a hard time remembering crucial parts of her childhood(doesnt know about her heritage)was taken in by a band of thieves(brother/ sister relationship w/ all of them)Learned to survive alone Is currently a mercenary
Which Role Play he/she/it will be in:Fantasy
Clothes:Loose fitting tank top-netting underneath that coves her torso and right arm to her wrist-arm covering on her left arm that reaches from above her elbow, to just over her knuckles(is slightly tight at spots to keep it on her arm)Typical baggy drawstring pants(her weapons are hidden within ALL of her clothing and hair)Strap sandals(a strap over the joints in her foot to her toes,one over the space right next to her ankle, and a strap connected to the last one mentioned that starts at the base and wraps around to a buckle on the one close to her toes)[her ball is in a hidden pocket in her pants,that dont look like they have any pockets!]
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Post by Clicky on Sept 14, 2004 18:03:50 GMT -5
better? *looks hopeful* ;D
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 18:09:09 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]hehe welcom to the cast for our RPG YOU ONE OF US NOW now[/glow]
[glow=red,2,300]POST[/glow]
oh ya the last one was NOT ME IT WAS MY SIS. ;D
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 18:12:19 GMT -5
YES you still dont have you m-s scor though
you know you can just click "modify" in the top right hand corner of your post....
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Post by Q on Sept 14, 2004 18:32:03 GMT -5
MP she said her score was 27.
Clicky, much better,but the eye color change is clishe. unless they only lighten or darken and dont really change color.
Very good and you are already approved
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Post by Clicky on Sept 14, 2004 19:19:01 GMT -5
Name:Tanner Age: roughly 5 years Height: 4 feet 1/4 inch(hey it counts!) Weight:65 lbs Background:Typical annoying little orphan.Grew up normally till the fire Eye color: a light Grey-blue Hair color:Messy dark brown Abilities/powers:can fit into small spaces,and mimic certain voices He is just my temporary side kick till i meet up with the other characters,unless i get too attached!
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 19:22:05 GMT -5
I gess he will need a m-s test.... maybe.. errr some help hear Q.... is this allowed? Im new at my new job...sorry
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Post by Q on Sept 14, 2004 19:28:18 GMT -5
[rant] he doesnt need a ms test, he already is annoying and clishe, and yes I het her do this. He is a tempoary character but we do need some info on him while he is here. If she does drop him off his character could be up for grabs if she will let anybody else take hims. Once she tires of him of course. Or she could end up killing him. Minor character, no test, existing in story so needs no approval. Basically an advanced NPC. [/end rant]
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 14, 2004 19:30:39 GMT -5
thank you and sorry again ;D
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Post by Clicky on Sept 23, 2004 20:40:02 GMT -5
its okay meeeerrrr..(i know this is REALLY late LOL) You are kinda new to the rules,eh? You cant know everything! Other wise you'd be God-moding in REAL LIFE! MUA HAHHAHAHAHAA!
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Post by Wolves_Cry on Sept 26, 2004 14:25:47 GMT -5
thank you
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Post by Clicky on Sept 27, 2004 17:36:01 GMT -5
awwwwwwwwww dont be like thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer! be happy!!
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