Post by Maquenta on Jan 9, 2005 21:11:22 GMT -5
So I enkoy watching the ghost stuff on travel, discovery, history and Sci-fi channels. And the other day, there was a show on about a rather violent poltergiest/possession that occured somewhere on the East Coast. Here is a basic outline of a story I created from these real evens. Keep in mind, it's an outline, in about a paragraph and hasn't been fleshed out.
A family, two parents, a daughter and two sons move into the idealic New England, old but renovated home. The family is happy, and life is good. But the eldest son, whose room is in the basement, begins to hears a voice, and see things in a small room connected to the larger space of his bedroom. This voice have such a violent, evil message, the boy is terrified and his younger brother stays with him in the basement. For a time, the voice goes away, but then one night, he sees his younger sister come down, switch the lights on, without bulbs in them, and stare rather evilly at him, then switch the lights off and disappear. He runs upstairs, and his sister is still sound asleep, on the second floor. The next day, he confronts the voice, the spirit. After confronting the spirit, he changes dramatically. he kicks his brother out of the basement and spends hours and hours alone, leaving his friends and writing violent poetry and stories. His parents are mystified, he is violent and argues more and more with them. This goes on for a few months, then one day, their cousin visits. She and the older boy are about the same age, and were great friends when they were younger, but they had grown apart. She decends into the basement to talk to him and is terrified by the dark change that ha come over her cousin. He tells her of a man that visits him and tells him to do things, dark things, violent things. She is worried, but doesn't say anything to the parents. Then, one night, she wakes to someone pulling off her covers. At first, she sees noone, then a man, dressed in a black suit and top-hat appears for a second, then is replaced by her cousin. He then pins her down and attempts to rape her. She screams, waking her aunt and uncle. The boy is carted away to the asylum. Later that night/early the next morning, the uncle leaves for work, he is a contracter and his car starts up and drives itself into his office, nearly killing him. At the home, the aunt is consoling the niece when the girl is ripped away and all sorts of objects start flying at the girl and mother. They call in an exorist, who calms the spirit, but it has fed off the boy for so long, it is a difficult task.
That is where my inspriation ends, and when I actually try to write it, nothing happens, talk happens, but nothing really exciting. But still, give me input, please.
<Maquenta>
A family, two parents, a daughter and two sons move into the idealic New England, old but renovated home. The family is happy, and life is good. But the eldest son, whose room is in the basement, begins to hears a voice, and see things in a small room connected to the larger space of his bedroom. This voice have such a violent, evil message, the boy is terrified and his younger brother stays with him in the basement. For a time, the voice goes away, but then one night, he sees his younger sister come down, switch the lights on, without bulbs in them, and stare rather evilly at him, then switch the lights off and disappear. He runs upstairs, and his sister is still sound asleep, on the second floor. The next day, he confronts the voice, the spirit. After confronting the spirit, he changes dramatically. he kicks his brother out of the basement and spends hours and hours alone, leaving his friends and writing violent poetry and stories. His parents are mystified, he is violent and argues more and more with them. This goes on for a few months, then one day, their cousin visits. She and the older boy are about the same age, and were great friends when they were younger, but they had grown apart. She decends into the basement to talk to him and is terrified by the dark change that ha come over her cousin. He tells her of a man that visits him and tells him to do things, dark things, violent things. She is worried, but doesn't say anything to the parents. Then, one night, she wakes to someone pulling off her covers. At first, she sees noone, then a man, dressed in a black suit and top-hat appears for a second, then is replaced by her cousin. He then pins her down and attempts to rape her. She screams, waking her aunt and uncle. The boy is carted away to the asylum. Later that night/early the next morning, the uncle leaves for work, he is a contracter and his car starts up and drives itself into his office, nearly killing him. At the home, the aunt is consoling the niece when the girl is ripped away and all sorts of objects start flying at the girl and mother. They call in an exorist, who calms the spirit, but it has fed off the boy for so long, it is a difficult task.
That is where my inspriation ends, and when I actually try to write it, nothing happens, talk happens, but nothing really exciting. But still, give me input, please.
<Maquenta>