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Keeping one true friend is more than enough....
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Lexx
Dec 25, 2004 21:48:16 GMT -5
Post by Unknown on Dec 25, 2004 21:48:16 GMT -5
Name:Lexx~no last~ Nickname:~none yet Gender:Male Race: Human Age:17 Weight:175 Height:6'9 Hair:Long ,spikey,dark brown Eyes:Slightly narrow, amber Clothes:Black, tattered pants-loose w/ a draw string;shirt-plain brown shirt -sleeves go down about 1/2 way over his hands-is slightly loose(clishe,I know...) Weapons: He's dirt poor, so whatever he can find... Abilities:~Able to memorize techniques taught to him once ~Martial Artist ~Speaks most native languages Past: Orphan. Raised by his masterin a small village. His parents were killed by an attack by roving thieves,and he was left to wander. Was treated fairly well, but had to work hard for anything he got. Is currently traveling since his mentor died.
Mary-Sue score-29
Do I need anything else?
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Lexx
Dec 26, 2004 19:00:18 GMT -5
Post by Cha0sEch0 on Dec 26, 2004 19:00:18 GMT -5
yoooo that whole useing other skill is way over broken and ive seen people use it , definitely something that shouldent me messed with and remember you maybe able to use some ones ksills but you have to survive it to
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Lexx
Dec 27, 2004 2:07:44 GMT -5
Post by ep0ch on Dec 27, 2004 2:07:44 GMT -5
yeah i have a nine year old character that does that through an advanced form of reasoning that i came up with and he's jus ta psychotic powerhouse...i've killed so many people with that little bastard because his skill is just like that.
mods--recommend not approving.
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Lexx
Jan 3, 2005 20:38:12 GMT -5
Post by Q on Jan 3, 2005 20:38:12 GMT -5
A few notes: --as stated above (somwhere) your character's ability it too vague and powerful to be uses --second its a mary-sue test not a mary-jane test --yes, your character is quite clishe, I mean what is with all these people not knowing their parents. I can understand if they were seperated at a young age to have very vague images but not none at all...
Sorry, I cannot approve your character yet. Maybe with a little more work though.
--Q out
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Lexx
Jan 7, 2005 17:01:55 GMT -5
Post by Clicky on Jan 7, 2005 17:01:55 GMT -5
looks like he changed it a bit... ;D
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Lexx
Jan 8, 2005 15:57:38 GMT -5
Post by ep0ch on Jan 8, 2005 15:57:38 GMT -5
ok now THAT's fair and a half...shiiiiiit....Q ya oughta approve this fool for toning it WAY down.
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Lexx
Jan 9, 2005 20:48:31 GMT -5
Post by Cha0sEch0 on Jan 9, 2005 20:48:31 GMT -5
able to memorize techniques taught to him? thats like how any charicter could learn and shouldent it be conciderd a passive abliity that all should have? (sorry im not tryingt o be annoying) but if i were you id go with some sort of elemental power but thats just me
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Lexx
Jan 9, 2005 22:01:38 GMT -5
Post by ep0ch on Jan 9, 2005 22:01:38 GMT -5
essentially it leaves open the ability to learn/master ANY and all elemental abilities taught to him, provided such is done. It's the same concept as his original character's ability, but less potent and with a smaller loophole.
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Lexx
Jan 12, 2005 15:58:21 GMT -5
Post by Clicky on Jan 12, 2005 15:58:21 GMT -5
so when is Q gonna even look?
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Lexx
Jan 12, 2005 21:17:53 GMT -5
Post by Q on Jan 12, 2005 21:17:53 GMT -5
Sorry, been busy lately.
Okay, I approve but be careful and add some very bizzare personality quriks if you want, makes 'em more intresting...
(okay random statement there)
APPROVED
--Q out
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Lexx
Jan 13, 2005 15:13:26 GMT -5
Post by Clicky on Jan 13, 2005 15:13:26 GMT -5
YAAAAAY!!!! ;D
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Lexx
Jan 13, 2005 15:32:37 GMT -5
Post by Q on Jan 13, 2005 15:32:37 GMT -5
Okay in my analysis the character's element is Mind (lots of those aren't there?). The ability is Okay as long as it doesn't go overboard. A limitation would be good such as learning the attacks and techniques but forgetting them quickly when not used.
For example in battle he could learn to throw fireballs but after the battle he would forget, slowly, but by the end of the day wouldn't have the ability anymore. He would keep his own LEARNED abilities that he worked at , not copied.
This would, in effect, save his mind from the stress and eventual insanity that owuld result from learning all these attacks and techniques. Also, the ability is only to learn the technique, not master or control it.
Another loophole is that his only power is to memorize techniques...not use them. Bacically he could learn what the person could do and how, and what signs they make when they do it...but never be able to actually do the technique...teach others maybe. A great talent for a spy, book keeper, or the like.
Please use one of my recommendations or be more specific. You are still approved, but like I said before, be careful.
--Q out
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Lexx
Jan 21, 2005 13:53:13 GMT -5
Post by Wolves_Cry on Jan 21, 2005 13:53:13 GMT -5
drat! you used what I was going to say *pout* ohwell thats what I get for not going o for a long time.;D ok I aprove! I dont realy have any critasisms or sugestions so have fun
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Lexx
Feb 8, 2005 16:50:35 GMT -5
Post by Unknown on Feb 8, 2005 16:50:35 GMT -5
yay.
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Lexx
Feb 8, 2005 17:46:25 GMT -5
Post by Q on Feb 8, 2005 17:46:25 GMT -5
Yep, post, but please, sometime soon, post more specifics... Or I will just assume one of them and enforce it...
--Q out
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